mmedemerteuil:

lightwolf:

lightwolf:

Editing? Oh you mean fic patching.

• Protagonist now has more complex motivations.
• Protagonist now remembers key facts about important people. He no longer develops convenient amnesia between cutscenes.
• Protagonist now has a cooldown on certain adverbs. Adverbs have been buffed by 30% to compensate.
• Developer note: Adverbs are important to writing but they are sometimes overused. This change keeps adverbs relevant while encouraging the use of adjectives and verbs.
• The horse now has a name.
• Deuteragonist snark power has been increased to 150, up from 75.

• Characters now no longer reference the previous version’s climate and have been updated to react appropriately to the currently set season.
• Solved a glitch where supernumerary limbs would sometimes emerge during complex physical interactions.
• Should no longer display “[insertnamehere]” during conversations and narration. All of such occurrances have been replaced with the appropriate tags.
• Conversation continuity has been improved. Characters will no longer inappropriately respond with lines from previous iterations of the narrative.
• All references to “Event A” have been purged to reflect changes in narrative structure.
• Now with more thematically-consistent swearing.